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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-05-05 12:10 PM



As I was responding to all of your poems today....I did something that I've never done before.
I read all the poems I wrote since I became a member in 2000.

I saw someone who loved another so very much that she would have laid done her life for that person.Where that went wrong?It no longer matters now.She will always love that person but if they were to meet again.....she would be unrecognizeable.

I also saw someone who was not secure in who she was and ran off with every person who promised to love her as she wanted to be loved.That woman no longer exists.

I saw a young woman who is very trusting and naive be taken advantage of in almost every way.....she no longer exists.

I look in the mirror and now see a woman who is mature beyond her dreams.Who knows what she wants and is making that happen.I also see a woman who is ready to be a wife and a mother.

I also see someone who is fine with who she is and no longer needs someone "seal of approval"

Overall,I have seen the many changes of me.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-05 12:31 PM


Oh Laura....thank God for the archives, ey?

I know what you mean about changes. I'm glad you could see the growth in you

ParisGrl
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2 posted 2004-05-05 02:44 PM


Dixie,

Those archives have served me well.  Thank you for your reply.  I'm glad i've finally seen the changes in me too.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-05-05 03:32 PM


Bravo and
Excellante~

ParisGrl
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4 posted 2004-05-06 12:03 PM


Lee,

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Laura~

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