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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-05-05 04:19 AM


Superb sun shines shimmering,
shadows slope along the ground,
from tall willows, emerald hued.
Birdsong echos and uplifts spirits.

Delight is all around, the day fair.
White flowers miniature and delicate.
Herby aroma of wild garlic on the wind.
Orange tip butterfies and treecreepers.

The river, she sits motionless,
reflections of willow on her film.
Under her banks, old logs and new buds,
she is dressed in newly flowered garlands.

Opening gates, crossing styles,
weather beaten, but smooth, from
the touch of walkers hands.
Just sitting, watching from shadows.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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1 posted 2004-05-05 04:21 AM


you do depict some of the loveliest scenes ive ever read
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2004-05-05 05:03 AM


lovelier still is the beauty I see in your heart...and when you write of such a scene, I can walk into the garden of your heart and imagine this and share it with you...this is what comes to mind when I think of you....beauty..sunshine..nature..love..



Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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3 posted 2004-05-05 06:40 AM


Muted ..thank you for your very kind words..much appreciated...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-05-05 06:42 AM


ARH my heart can feel the sweetness of love..and i am able to create things of beauty because of it....love gives me that ability..thank you..

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-05-05 04:02 PM


This is SO beautiful...lovely lovely images.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

Suetang
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6 posted 2004-05-05 07:23 PM


Hello Phil

Your words always paint such a beautiful picture and this was truly lovely.  I hope all is well with you.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2004-05-06 05:00 AM


Enchantress...thank you SO much for your very kind words...GR...

Sue....yes i am fine...thank you for your very kind words too....GR...

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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