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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-04 10:43 PM



I bathe in liquidity
surrounded in fluidity
transcending serenity
flowing into eternity
Won't you come join me
In this river of thought?

S.A.T.

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-05-04 10:47 PM


A warm bath...
Very nice
TD

Susan
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2 posted 2004-05-04 10:51 PM


yes, I'm still dripping

Smiles -- Susan

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3 posted 2004-05-04 11:47 PM


ah, a nice warm bath would be relaxing
let me find my towel

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