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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-05-04 07:50 PM


On A Beautiful
Tradewind Day
In May


In the breezeway of the
Ohana Edgewater Hotel
I sat and talked to you
on the Kawaiahao Church pew.
That was the place you
stole my heart away,
on a beautiful
tradewind day
in May.


JamesLee
May04
2004
In the breezeway
of the hotel is an
original pew (1842)
from the Kawaiahao Church.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-04 08:21 PM


Very nice.

Susan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-04 08:30 PM


Lovely James...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-05-04 10:04 PM


youv'e got such a loving heart liked this as i like all of your's


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-05-06 12:21 PM


Thank you Susan, Enchantress and MGROVES for the nice responses....James
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