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My Window
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James McInerney Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 83 |
MY WINDOW. My world doesn't end at your window, It ends when I whisper "Good night". The tears that I cry wont truly show, The feelings I hold deep down inside. My world doesn't end at your window, It ended as the rain fell last night. Your last breath, as I held you, Through my tears as I kissed you, "I love you" my angel ... "Good night". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful, lyrical and very romantic. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Poignantly rendered~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this sings  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
My world doesn't end at your window This line says so much! Awesome! I hope all is well for you! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is pretty |
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