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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-05-04 08:52 AM






Inside Out

Appearances fade
Soul lights burn a brighter glow
Flaming wisdom’s sigh

~*~

For Maree,
and anyone
who takes on
the process
of aging,
gracefully


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-04 09:05 AM


lovely words, Karilea


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2 posted 2004-05-04 09:07 AM


How lovely to read this early today Karilea.
And, the true beauty does come from the soul.
You m'dear have a beautiful soul.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

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3 posted 2004-05-04 11:46 AM


  you are lovely dear lady....
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4 posted 2004-05-04 12:22 PM


you are good at these...

sigh

Annie Shadow
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5 posted 2004-05-04 12:35 PM


The simple beauty of this has warmed my heart.
PKreturns
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6 posted 2004-05-04 12:44 PM


Very beautiful and very true words.
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7 posted 2004-05-04 04:47 PM


Ahhh Karilea, you're so beautiful yanno that?
Thank you for this, for warming me and putting a big smile on my face first thing this morning, a lovely way to start my day.



Mxx

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!


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8 posted 2004-05-04 05:40 PM


quote:
Appearances fade
Soul lights burn a brighter glow
Flaming wisdom’s sigh



... sigh, this is very beautiful and comforting indeed.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-05-04 09:58 PM


very lovely...thank you for being so uplifiting
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10 posted 2004-05-05 04:48 AM


Beautiful, Karilea.....
beauty does come from within, doesn't it?

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11 posted 2004-05-05 07:08 AM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2004-05-05 08:38 AM


Glowing write Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

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13 posted 2004-05-05 09:54 AM


wonderful words make a wonderful write...

regards
sudhir

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14 posted 2004-05-05 08:52 PM


Karilea,
Leave it to you to make aging look attractive! But then again the options aren't that great. This is a reassuring write that I much enjoyed.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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15 posted 2004-05-06 09:52 PM


Hey Sunshine! Now you know there is no way I am going to allow this to stay on page 2. BUMP! Back to the top it goes. Love the way you make each word count for so much dear friend. It speaks volumes! Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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16 posted 2004-05-06 09:56 PM


I would say it is a good thing that the soul lights burn a brighter glow, otherwise wisdom would be lost in a sigh. Enjoyed!
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