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J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
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Iloilo City, Philippines

0 posted 2004-05-04 07:31 AM



note: it's so sad how people try to suppress their feelings because of society's norms
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Id Forbid

Come with me, barely breathing
Into that pitch- black space in your mind
Into that core of your being
that you dared not find

Let us strip each other naked in that dark womb
void of any measure or distinction
and to the beckoning force let us succumb:
two souls yearning
to dance in immortal union.

© Copyright 2004 Jasmine Sagge - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-05-04 07:48 AM


J.Samm
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-04 12:44 PM


yes, it is sad...quite sad
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2004-05-04 01:21 PM


You've written an impassioned plea here.  I deserves to be heard.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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