She Asked Herself If It Was Love Or Lust

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Open Poetry #32

She Asked Herself If It Was Love Or Lust

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-05-03 10:29 PM

When she met him
she felt different
different than ever
before she had felt

When she thought of him
of his touch....
his voice....his kiss
she felt herself melt

But then the days
turned into years
and they are
still together

Of all the people
they know and care for
with each other to be
they had much rather

A love so different
it feels so strong
so true....it has to
be for real

She asked herself
at the start.....love or lust
but now love has grown
and their hearts into one have sealed

And still......
when she thinks of him
his touch....
his voice....his kiss
she feels herself melt........

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-05-03 10:53 PM

Mmmm -- simply lovely and very romantic, I like it a lot.

Susan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-03 10:55 PM

Very nice Ethel..
and when we do meet someone new and have such strong feelings..
we do ask this question don't we?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2004-05-04 12:29 PM

Yes and in your beautiful words , it is shown how much in love you have grown

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-04 02:07 AM

never know what can happen ey?

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-05-04 09:28 AM

when she thinks of him
his touch....
his voice....his kiss
she feels herself melt........

a wonderful feeling, isn't it Ethel?

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-05-04 03:27 PM

yes indeed, a great feeling

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-05-04 03:37 PM

I like the ending to this one. There's hope in the world-you show it to me.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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