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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-03 07:56 PM

Strikes the flame intense enough to turn sand to glass
Strobing me from sky to center
Forging beacon in my belly, scattering in shards of fire
Sensations abysmal in the echo of uncertainty its bed
Glow red

Chilled in the fever
Revised in the numb of spent
Glow red

Seizing particles of dust that cling in facets
Melting in the gruel of sparks and molten streams
Spooning soup of liquid hopes and dreams
Glow red

The quake is but the blasting furnace splitting sound
Making known its name in transformation
Burning off the cells of prison shells
Until there is but clear
Glow red

Yet you are here
Sending messages of treble and base
Breathing steam upon the flush of grace
Glow red

That this is said
And all that lingers here
Glow red

Copyright Kkh 5/3/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-03-2004 09:36 PM).]

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

1 posted 2004-05-03 09:19 PM

this is different from your usual weave and it is interesting...enjoyed

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-05-03 11:10 PM

Seizing particles of dust that cling in facets
Melting in the gruel of sparks and molten streams
Spooning soup of liquid hopes and dreams
Glow red

Very interesting. I really liked this verse. Great imagery. Enjoyed the read.

Susan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-04 02:12 AM

definitely different, enojoyed the new style

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-05-04 08:14 AM

I also found this interesting and enjoyed...

Maree

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-04 08:54 AM

Very nice Kathleen...different, and enjoyed very much.
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-05-04 09:19 AM

I echo the others..and enjoyed this verse:

The quake is but the blasting furnace splitting sound
Making known its name in transformation
Burning off the cells of prison shells
Until there is but clear
Glow red

have felt like this many times...

M

Annie Shadow
Junior Member

since 2004-05-02

Posts 27
Drifting

7 posted 2004-05-04 12:40 PM

"Spooning soup of liquid hopes and dreams"

Amazing imagery. I think this line will stick in my head all day...hope you don't mind...I'll take good care of it! Smiles

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-05-04 10:04 PM

ummm..hmmm...i dont know if its "just me" today, but this came out rather sexy..

and i like it!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2004-05-04 10:11 PM

liked this

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