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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-05-03 11:26 AM



Incorrect nature that gains detection?
partners to choose with private direction
satisfaction comes when a match is made
personal changes sparkle as monogamy fades.


I am bored with life and how it is
to sit back and fill out a personal quiz!
So my hand is placed there and here
keen to manage resources, romance is near...

Here is a person who latches onto things
and knows fortunes a match may bring;
find amusement in the creation of social flares
sparks ignite as one manages romantic affairs

Not to confuse with who would meddle
in the affairs of the heart,
it's idle households where I peddle
so couples have a new start..

Interested to rekindle idle households
so abundant produce can emerge seven-fold..
so hands are placed far and wide
idle households fail to hide.

Corrected natures are my delectation,
personal matches replace imperfections?


[This message has been edited by wordwizard (05-04-2004 01:43 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-03 12:50 PM


Martin....too many idle households in the world these days...idle becomes broken....

you got me thinking with this write, especially those last two lines

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-05-03 09:43 PM


You always choose a unique topic and I appreciate the opportunity to reflect on these words...
Complacency fills the job jar these days...and the dynamics of couple seem to dry in the arid climate of that.
Becoming brittle and dull...oh, but to linger in that sudden sun shower that renews in fragrant supple hands.  Smiling at you Martin.
TD

Suetang
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3 posted 2004-05-03 10:26 PM


Hi Martin

You have given us a very thought provoking piece of writing which I really enjoyed.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

wordwizard
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4 posted 2004-05-04 01:48 PM


one also thinks of the "Dolly" character played by Barbara Streisand and Mr. Vandergelder played by the late Walter Mathau..the play version "The Matchmaker" has been done over at least twice from the English into Austrian and back to English again.


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