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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-05-03 07:18 AM

The Blind of You

You took me in a blinding coop
That stays my heart a residue
And caught me in your let of soul
That ghosts upon my Islands shoal

And ever since it’s been my bliss
The trance that came with your fist kiss
Those fantasies that once took hold
Have never left the fires cold

And now my world is near unseat
My children leave my nest complete
And I am left with renders think
With tenderness but on the brink

What better time could I sew?
What better time could I know?
And though an age is passing bye
I feel some how it’s not goodbye.

Osmotic is forever’s past
With eternity as the last

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2004-05-03 08:07 AM

Very nice poetry
And a touching tribute to love

Gloom

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2004-05-03 08:36 AM

A very romantic write, Sy. Good morning.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-03 08:56 AM

Lovely romantic offering from you this bright Monday morn Sy!
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-05-03 11:07 AM

And now my world is near unseat
My children leave my nest complete
And I am left with renders think
With tenderness but on the brink
================================

well....I would read you till I go blind...does that count. lol

Love the tenderness of this write Sy-babes.

*ww*

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-05-03 11:28 AM

Mornin', Seymour! This is tenderness, at it's best!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-05-03 12:40 PM

it's never goodbye

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-05-03 03:42 PM

So that's how it's done!
I never knew...

Ah Sy...so good to read you. Three days without Sypoetry and I get a little frantic! Now, to dig up Saturday's and Sunday's!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2004-05-03 09:43 PM

"And ever since it’s been my bliss
The trance that came with your first kiss
Those fantasies that once took hold
Have never left the fires cold"

I knew a girl like that...

Cool write Sy!!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2004-05-03 09:56 PM

Another excvellent write, Sy

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-05-03 10:15 PM

And ever since it’s been my bliss
The trance that came with your fist kiss
Those fantasies that once took hold
Have never left the fires cold

Beautiful, Seymour....just how I feel.

Hugs,
Ethel

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