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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-05-03 06:42 AM


Two feet walking on,
Shall fear be in the next step;
Or when journey done
Realize each movements help.

One person going
Over hidden horizon;
There lies unknowing
Till the two feet’s steps are done.

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-05-03 08:13 AM


Professor,
You got that right. Enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-03 12:47 PM


was waiting for this, almost missed it...
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
3 posted 2004-05-03 02:49 PM


Sometimes its the not knowing that keeps us stepping into the unknown.  

  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Annie Shadow
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since 2004-05-02
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Drifting
4 posted 2004-05-03 03:09 PM


I liked this poem...very straight forward with subtle yet profound wisdom.  Great job
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