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Annie Shadow
Junior Member

since 2004-05-02

Posts 27
Drifting

0 posted 2004-05-02 04:24 PM

It was the night.  It was the dark.
It was this empty place
A feeling so misguided...will I ever see your face?
Now whispering and promising won't do me any good
I need the night.  I need the dark
For thoughts misunderstood
For in these moments all alone, I find more of myself
I find the night.  I find the dark
I find somebody else

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-05-02 04:49 PM

Annie~

This is a poignant entrance ... wonderfully done~

Again, I welcome you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-05-02 05:08 PM

Hello Annie, I enjoyed reading your first post.
And I'd like to give you a warm welcome to PIP.
I hope that you enjoy it here.
Hugs,
Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-02 05:20 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS ANNIE!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-02 05:27 PM

Welcome Annie

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-05-02 07:30 PM

Its nice to see it was only a "quick darkness"...because everyone deserves a little light. I enjoyed your first post and hope that you have a lovely time here at PIP.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2004-05-02 11:13 PM

Awesome entrance into pipland wow , i wanted to quote a line from this but the whole thing rocks , great read , great write

-wolf

Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

7 posted 2004-05-03 03:53 PM

Welcome! I really enjoyed that

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

8 posted 2004-05-03 05:01 PM

Welcome Annie! I hope you enjoy your stay. Your first poem here is excellent...maybe because it reminds me of my own work.

I enjoyed your work.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-05-03 05:07 PM

I find the night. I find the dark
I find somebody else

~*~

I enjoyed this Annie! Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

10 posted 2004-05-03 06:30 PM

well done

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2004-05-03 06:53 PM

Welcome Annie.
Wonderful first post.
Looking forward to more of your work.
ThisDiamond

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

12 posted 2004-05-03 06:59 PM

Very Nicely done!!!

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