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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2004-05-02 03:38 PM





If I keep playing around. One of these days I'll get it right. Hope you enjoy.I have posted the poem so you can read. This is not coming out to clear. This is based on the TV show Nashvile star and some of the comments.
Hugs Bon-Bon



Tight Jeans

Tight jeans, city lights
City rain, rolling thunder  
Crashing against my windowpane

The city beckoning to a country boy
Guitar in hand armed  
With melodies resounding in his head
City boys, fancy suits
Go home country boy
You don’t have the look to be a country star

Tight jeans, city lights
City rain, rolling thunder
Crashing against my windowpane

The city beckoning to a country boy
A trail of cigarettes and heartbreak
Dark bars, cheap bottled wine
Weak friendships, strong friendships
Stay country boy
You will be a country star

Tight jeans, city lights
City rain, rolling thunder
Crashing against my windowpane

The city beckoning to a country boy
The look
Tight jeans, black hat, framing his smiling face
The mountain has been climbed
Attained notoriety
Country boy now a famous shining star
  
His words flowing across the air waves
Words of his life, his struggles
His words;
Tight jeans, city lights
City rain, rolling thunder
Crashing against my windowpane.

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1 posted 2004-05-02 05:01 PM


OhBonnie~
I watched it ... and salivated through the final three, two, one picks !

On downright TALENTED AND SEXY ... the second place dude had my hot little breath all over the screen~
But that little winner was a talented little cutie pie too !

Thanks for this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-05-02 05:28 PM


oh yeah!
Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-05-02 05:39 PM


Yepper Marge that little ole Brad Cotter has pretty twinkling blue eyes and a sexy voice.
George was a hunk also with his kind of deep voice. Yum........! Now why am I saying yum they are not chocolate, heehee, sure would like to give them a lick. Hahahaha. Being bad ...I know.I voted for Brad.....
Bon-Bon

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