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Open Poetry #32

Finding Escaped Words

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2004-05-01 11:19 PM

Always together
you and I
like two peas
in a pod.

Then one day
you were gone.

Following the tracks
left behind in my heart...
I found you again.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2004-05-02 12:05 PM

Following the tracks
left behind in my heart...
I found you again.

love the ending lines
nice and tender froggy
-jw

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-05-02 01:46 AM

Good for you, in both regards!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-02 02:41 AM

it's good when that happens

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-05-02 05:35 PM

froggy,
I love the way you write so much into so few words! Glad to see those tracks followed. I always enjoy visiting your poetry.
Sadie

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-05-02 07:32 PM

To be able to compact so much emotion into such a small space is an art in itself.
Smashing write.
TD

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2004-05-02 11:56 PM

I thank each and everyone of you
for the sweet comments.

:-)

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