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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-01 08:59 PM


This scent of you that catches me in turquoise veiled breeze
Taking me in lavished warmth that floods my veins in please
A force that blindly humbles me in colors hue of spring
The rain that stirs in April skies ‘til May comes out to sing

This you that brings such vivid guise of all that flirts my mind
The richest dreams of ever had come forth for me to find
Utopia reigns full content, resumes another dance
My garden blooms beneath the touch of supple glint romance

The berries ripe to stream my neck in perfume tainted sweet
And peaches in a luscious state to grace my plate complete
The sun is warm, the moon is full, each star a candles fire
And all about my space requites complete and full desire

Your scent the wind of mystery to find me in its spell
And every image in my mind could not begin to tell
The full that all your presence bears etched clearly and so sure
This scent of you the essence of, all that could want no more

Copyright Kkh 5/1/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-05-01 09:03 PM


Once again, nodding, (yer gonna get sick of me if you aren't already)

this is just stunning...

You wrap desire in eloquent lacy foil, m'lady.

I'm so envious.

Magnus
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2 posted 2004-05-01 09:23 PM


Yes,  she certainly does..doesn't she!!

You are exceptional K.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-05-01 09:32 PM


A special thanks to both of you for always encouraging me.  It is never un-noticed, and always appreciated.  To have praise from so many excellent authors here is an honor indeed.
Hugs,
TD

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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4 posted 2004-05-02 01:51 AM


"The berries ripe to stream my neck in perfume tainted sweet
And peaches in a luscious state to grace my plate complete
The sun is warm, the moon is full, each star a candles fire
And all about my space requites complete and full desire"

Deeeeeelicious poetry!  


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-02 02:36 AM


gawd! what a descriptive imagination you have!
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2004-05-02 07:21 AM


quote:
This scent of you that catches me in turquoise veiled breeze
Taking me in lavished warmth that floods my veins in please
A force that blindly humbles me in colors hue of spring
The rain that stirs in April skies ‘til May comes out to sing

This you that brings such vivid guise of all that flirts my mind
The richest dreams of ever had come forth for me to find
Utopia reigns full content, resumes another dance
My garden blooms beneath the touch of supple glint romance

The berries ripe to stream my neck in perfume tainted sweet
And peaches in a luscious state to grace my plate complete
The sun is warm, the moon is full, each star a candles fire
And all about my space requites complete and full desire

Your scent the wind of mystery to find me in its spell
And every image in my mind could not begin to tell
The full that all your presence bears etched clearly and so sure
This scent of you the essence of, all that could want no more



Just gorgeous, absolutely ENTICING, every line of it!
Love, Margherita

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-05-02 05:27 PM


TD,
   I could have copied this whole poem.  Your imagery and color is delightful.  I enjoyed this very much.
                Sadie

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-05-02 06:22 PM


Kathleen, you appear to pen these so effortlessly.
Beautiful piece of work once again.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

Corinne
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state of confusion
9 posted 2004-05-02 08:20 PM


Oh, this is magical, a delight!


Corinne

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