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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-05-01 03:25 PM



unexpected touch

dry dusty hollow echoes

Tin Man in the dark

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-01 06:42 PM


This immediately brought mind association to the words of a song, "Oz didn't give nothin' to the Tin Man, that he didn't already have!"  

Enjoyed!  

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-05-01 07:20 PM


After reading Dixie's senryu speaking of the Tin Man, I appreciate your creation, dear icebox.
... and I hear the sound of it.
And I love it.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2004-05-01 07:25 PM


aw, icey...

'taint nuttin' that a little WD40 can't fix!


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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-05-02 10:04 PM


~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-02 10:20 PM



only a true heart
can reach out to touch its match
without attempting


thank you icebox

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6 posted 2004-05-03 03:24 AM


cuz I can
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-05-03 03:24 AM


and cuz I forgot to click the library button
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2004-05-03 01:38 PM


warm words, and never a sign of rust
Martie
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9 posted 2004-05-03 01:42 PM


icebox

I think the acoustics are probably really good in there!  

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2004-05-04 04:00 PM


Lovely. The Tin Man rules.


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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