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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2004-05-01 12:27 PM



Too Short


time is
much too short
of being
elegantly surprised
in simplicity
so capture
each moment
before it passes


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2004-05-01 12:28 PM


Good advice to all.  Great write!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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2 posted 2004-05-01 01:32 PM


you got that right!
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3 posted 2004-05-01 01:47 PM


hmmm at the present i'm in a state of mind that sees time as draaaaaaaagging on..but i hear you it's all relative and depends on the time of day
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4 posted 2004-05-03 01:29 AM


At my age I am into "seconds", but what wonderful advice (and I love the new picture Helen.)

Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

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5 posted 2004-05-05 08:57 PM


Sharon,
You're talking about time, right?

Helen,
I spotted your pic the other day. WooHoo! But the best for me is always your writing. You pack so much into so little. Excellent.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2004-05-05 09:08 PM


OneSlick~
again you touch me tenderly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-05-05 09:40 PM


too right !!

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