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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-05-01 11:28 AM



Key

A soft kiss
is but a key
to unlock a door
that opens a heart
to a love
that is deeply
devoted to lasting
...forever

believe in what your heart feels...

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-05-01 11:30 AM


scorpio,
How about a hard kiss? LOL


JL
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2 posted 2004-05-01 12:27 PM


The mind depicting the heart’s desire.  What a beautiful poem Scorpio!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


scorpio
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3 posted 2004-05-01 12:32 PM


Sy, a hard kiss would certainly leave an impression!!  Thanks for stopping in.

Thank you JL.  I appreciate your comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-05-01 01:31 PM


yes it is
iliana
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5 posted 2004-05-01 02:23 PM


I agree -- said so well!   ....jo
GG
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6 posted 2004-05-01 03:22 PM


mmhmm
yeah... I like this one.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

scorpio
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7 posted 2004-05-01 04:29 PM


Thank you Dixie.  Glad you agree.

And Iliana, thank your for your support.

Thank you Alyssa.  Your kind comments are very much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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8 posted 2004-05-01 04:34 PM



Ah, dear Scorpio..
It is time we read your words of love
again here on these blue pages..
you have been missed.
And, the kiss..?..Yes, gently placed...there,
is indeed the key to open the door to her heart.
Lovely piece this is.
~Smiles, Hugs, & Love, Tinker~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

scorpio
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9 posted 2004-05-01 04:40 PM


Enchantress, thank you. Your kinds words mean a great deal to me.  A gentle kiss...there...is truly a wonderful expression of love and passion.

believe in what your heart feels...

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2004-05-01 10:16 PM


Oh scorpio, this is so lovely and heartfelt~  

Now where did I leave my keys!!  dang!

scorpio
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11 posted 2004-05-02 08:54 AM


Thank you BluesSerenade.  I appreciate your support.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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scorpio
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13 posted 2004-05-02 07:04 PM


Thank you Enchantress..that was so kind of you to bump this humble offering back up..thanks again for your support and encouragement..

believe in what your heart feels...

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14 posted 2004-05-02 07:39 PM


soooo sweet
im glad it was brought back to the top

scorpio
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15 posted 2004-05-02 07:43 PM


Thank you Dawn.

believe in what your heart feels...

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16 posted 2004-05-05 05:21 PM


I missed this one earlier , soo glad i found it now a supple write scorps , thanks for giving me a smile
wolfy

scorpio
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17 posted 2004-05-05 09:57 PM


Aujussy Wolf, I'm very good you enjoyed this poem.  Thank you for your kind comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

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