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marcel
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0 posted 2004-05-01 09:41 AM



Difference between Men and Women

You love me
I care for you
You adore me
I care for you
You say, “We were meant to be”
I say, “What is meant will be”
You say, “I don’t understand”
I say, “Some things are beyond comprehension”
You call me selfish and cruel
I call you a friend
You cry before walking away
I whisper, “I still care for you”

Marcel

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-01 09:56 AM


Marcel~
You come in quietly and *gift* the morning with such a thoughtful ponder~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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JL
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2 posted 2004-05-01 09:58 AM


Very nice marcel.  Enjoyed.
JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-05-01 10:01 AM


marcel,
Well done, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-01 01:49 PM


m'friend, you have it down pat
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-05-01 03:14 PM


There are all forms of love...none any less than the other.  Beautifully expressed.
TD

GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2004-05-01 03:19 PM


Yep, see?
men just don't get it!
You've got it down...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-05-03 01:21 AM


Nice writiing...James
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