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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-01 12:35 PM


See Through Lingerie


If you look
real hard into
a womans eyes,
not asking
any questions,
not expecting
any answers,
and she looks
back softly
and says "yes",
you know your world
is about to change.


JamesLee
April30
2004

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-01 01:32 AM


OhJamesMichael~
You read the eyes so well~
I love this !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-01 03:36 AM


now this...this is good!
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-05-01 07:50 PM


hmmm ... James, I have my doubts about "not expecting any answers"!
But this is lovely!
With love, the world changes indeed!
Love, Margherita

Beki
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4 posted 2004-05-01 10:56 PM


oh bravo! I really like this one-very effective and succinct!
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2004-05-02 09:58 PM



I love it when a man says something like this. You've captured my heart

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-05-02 10:01 PM


...............yes.


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

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7 posted 2004-05-02 10:11 PM


awwww the eyes tell it all.....nice James you do romance so well!

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-05-03 12:57 PM


Thank you Marge, passing shadows, Margherita, Beki, Elizabeth, Enchantress and Greeneyes for the lovely responses...James
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