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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-04-30 02:00 PM



Embrace of the night;

vacant hearts wander
the chambers of darkness

converge on the sky
hanging hope
to blank spaces,

as stories are scripted
from glimmers of faith,
binding of threads
reaching for light;

As the dark pales from sight;

the heart does rememeber
as the stars slip beneath now

the embers still glowing
on the rise of the morning

unveiled as the covers lift
come the dreams
sown by night.


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-04-30 02:04 PM


"as stories are scripted
from glimmers of faith,"

YES.

This is full of wistful wonder, "m".

Delicate, and yet has impact.

I enjoyed this very much.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-30 02:30 PM


yes, the heart does remember
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-04-30 05:18 PM


Never forgotten...
TD

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4 posted 2004-04-30 06:33 PM


InkyOne~
This is just gorgeous !

Your thoughts so mirror a time-ago in my life ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-04-30 06:36 PM


As the dark pales from sight;

the heart does rememeber
as the stars slip beneath now

Michele, the night does have magical remembrances.....

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-01 12:38 PM


Very nice...James
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-05-01 08:04 AM


thanks dear poets and friends
bklynboy
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8 posted 2004-05-01 11:03 AM


an embrace of the night is good.....but an embrace in the day is even better, yum!
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-05-01 11:09 AM


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an embrace of the night is good.....but an embrace in the day is even better, yum!

bboy, my friend, you send me

Margherita
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10 posted 2004-05-02 07:27 AM


Dear Michele, your "Embrace of the Night" is a pure delight!
I love your style very much.
Love, Margherita

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