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JL
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0 posted 2004-04-30 12:09 PM


Two


Within the impatient sea I travel, looking for the shine of your eyes.
I am the sea rolling off the shore, pounding impatiently.
Seeking out not knowing what I should see.
The line of the shore cannot hold me.
Wind and ocean I shall be.
At the door of the sea.
At depth, you and me.
In the tide I will hide,
In the blue sea,
You are me.
Me - you,
Two.


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1 posted 2004-04-30 02:09 PM


JL~
This is just totally beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-04-30 02:44 PM


pretty write
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-04-30 03:23 PM


Even the presentation here was that of the melodic waves.  Nicely done.
TD

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