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Do You Know Me?
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Do You Know Me? |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Do you know me? Your fingers trace a depth across my flesh...as if familiar to the bone. When I close my eyes...do I vanish in your touch? There is nothing to our distance. I am the void beneath your stare. Do you see me? When you close your eyes and face the night...am I the breeze that sweeps lips? I am not absent from this kiss. Do you know me? Close your eyes...and whisper yes. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shaking my head and smilin' You are an amazing writer! YES!!! screamed out in my head! Great. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whispering.....yes. Lovely Eric! Hugs~
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Eric. You know I like, because it reminds me of me and my Love...  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
Very Nice  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes. yesyesyesyesyes...  LOL... Very good, Sir. Very very good! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Do I know you? Yes ... since forever! You are magical "to the bone" and beyond. I love you. Margherita |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
It's always nice to read your work, Eric. Romance at it's best. ~Tier |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- what an alluring, romantic poem!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
soft and warm...very passionate piece |
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