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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-04-29 07:31 AM


Wavelength

Fine order joining blue setting places
Molten moist air, names karmic arches
Drowning in some azure watershed
Provocative moving leap years spearhead

Blue delirium, the palette convulses
Light fragrant breezes moves promise
Firm shining segments chant through my window
Drinking reflections of a magnetic cello

Into the essence of mind, rings neutral infinity
Wondering if God has needs?
Nearing a place of some articulate condition
Finding their own way from famine
Into the embrace of white sanded beaches

The gravity indulges boundless where a genuine
Heart sings…drizzling illuminates from a sea of intimacy

Query the first blossom of love
Solid wisdom leans into longer views
I see His face overflowing the shadows
Conception of self-esteem in divine clarity
Companionships the meek with ease
Walking on pallid waters of insight

We are the builders of intellect and living flame
Directly from the base of a rock face
How small the firelight, yet beautiful
Gypsy music pours wine all over our tables

Seep into the light, beyond natural law
Outburst of schools re-ignite themselves
Living within the heart of a symphony of allthings
Branching long predetermined white herrings
Bearing sweet affection…penetrating to the soul

Warming passions for balance paints refinement
Befriending vows of brightly sequined magic
Where for lives a ruby flame
Bursting alive the mystery of horizons

A western amorphous painting of absolution
insinuates expression
Gathering a liquid lyrics
Such tangible form of meek gain
From the minstrel’s mind…drink
The contemplation and certainty
Nurturing eyes begin to shine
Flirting with love and devotional prayer
Into the arms of autonomy
Dreaming twilight becomes



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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-04-29 07:50 AM


LeeJ
Yes, all that and much more, good morning dear.

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-04-29 11:50 AM


Walking on pallid waters of insight

We are the builders of intellect and living flame
Directly from the base of a rock face
How small the firelight, yet beautiful
Gypsy music pours wine all over our tables

yes and ditto to sy
and we see when we are open to such beauty that flows from your depths of soul

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-04-29 12:46 PM


your mind is a garden
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-04-29 12:48 PM


You write such awe inspiring pieces..
from the depth of your soul.
Excellent write.
Hugs~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

JL
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5 posted 2004-04-29 12:51 PM


Oh yeah!  This is yet another wonderful write!  Amazing, to say the least.

Great write Lee J.
JL  



JL

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-04-29 01:49 PM


Wonderful visuals here...

But hold the phone...

This statement short circuited my brain..

"Wondering if God has needs?"

Blew me away...

So I thought..okay if there is a higher power does he/she have needs?

Well, I guess if he/she made us then the answer is yes.  


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-04-29 02:12 PM


Lee, I loved the picture you painted here with your words.

But, this part also jumped out at me, as with Susan........

Into the essence of mind, rings neutral infinity
Wondering if God has needs?


I think that He does want us to love him
for what He does for us.....but I don't know if
it's a need  or a want.
Either way, thanks for making me think.
Hugs,  
Ethel

Opeth
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8 posted 2004-04-29 02:56 PM


These words were bursting with imagery and thought. enjoyed!
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