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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
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TX, USA

0 posted 2004-04-29 01:00 AM



Me lad, I find it passin' 'ard-
To pass yon bonnie bleez...
'Tis autumn an' there's teeth, I say-
In yon fair freshnin' breeze.

Money? Nay, 'tis broke I be-
Yet for a mug o' ale...
I'd yarn o' places tha' I've seen,
An' spin a Traveler's Tale.

Ye ken the taiga? Or the steppes?
A bitter place indeed,
An' many the bold laddie-bye,
Upon the snows did bleed.

An' Rome? I were a legionairre-
'Twas in the Sixth, and Tenth...
Our eagles gleamed above the fight,
To gi' our sword arms strength.

Crusades? Nay, lad...'twas rape and spoil-
An' nay for things divine...
An' in no such a bloody farce...
Plied I this blade o' mine!

A soldier, aye! And sailor, too!
I've seen me share o' gore...
A left a bit o' mine as well,
On many furin shore.

'Tis late, an' wou' it be too much,
To sleep in yonder nook?
P'raps ye'd 'ave a crust o' bread-
An' even 'ave a book?

Bless ye friend, yer far too kind-
But on life's bonnie scale-
I think ye'll find it's tit for tat-
Board, for a Traveler's Tale.

© Copyright 2004 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-04-29 01:41 AM


John, I love the dialect -- and such a clever, clever write!   ......jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-04-29 03:17 AM


different from your usual...enjoyed the tale!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-29 08:47 AM


Excellent write cowboy!
This is different and as much enjoyed as the others.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-04-29 08:50 AM


awesome, fun, spoken with truth and humor...very much enjoyed, thankyou for writing and sharing.
scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
5 posted 2004-04-29 08:54 AM


Most entertaining and creative write,John. I throughly enjoyed the travels through history.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-04-29 09:00 AM


Forgot to say.....
I LOVE THE NEW PIC!!  

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