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0 posted 2004-04-28 10:00 PM


Inspired by William Murdock Tackett...my Grandfather.
I never saw him...but now I feel I know him far
better from what he wrote.

Grandfather, grandfather, your heart does bleed.
Lonely, so lonely, a son you do need.
The times are hard, and your worries so deep.
Lie back Grandfather, rest now and just sleep.

He loves you, admires you, inspires you too.
He wants you, desires you, this need is true.
His days are long, his nights lonely and cold.
Your strong arms he needs, to touch and to hold.

Grandfather, grandfather, this war,so long,
It will pass some day, be patient, be strong.
A son will return, be with you again,
God willing, I know this will be his plan.

The land is cold, so desolate and bleak,
the floors are bare, their wooden and they creak.
A sailor’s home away from those he missed
as steam did leak, and a valve slowly hissed.

Oh father I know you did miss your Dad
as much as he would or he ever had.
You both sired your sons to carry your name
a word so proud, shared by all just the same.

The war finally ended and sons returned.
They gave it their all, they fought and they learned.
The smiles and cheers echoed across the miles
with memories kept of cold lonely isles.

© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2004-04-29 01:10 AM


Hello Barry

I was so moved by your words, they touched me deeply.  Your words are always so very much enjoyed.  I hope all is well with you, my friend.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2004-04-29 01:23 AM


Barry, this was the kind of poem that really touches me because I know it is straight from your heart.  I'm sure your grandfather and father would have felt so proud to read this!   ......jo
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3 posted 2004-04-29 03:06 AM


if I could hug you, I would
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-04-29 03:00 PM


Well done Barry!!

They are both smiling!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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5 posted 2004-04-29 03:48 PM


you bring forth a moment in time that weve watched in pictures and films and bring it to life with your words of tribute
JL
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6 posted 2004-04-29 06:16 PM


A tribute any grandfather would be proud to read.  Wonderful write.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”
JL

Startime55
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7 posted 2004-04-29 06:54 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! A grandson pays tribute to one he has never know but can feel the beat of his heart through his words. Magnificently done. **hug**

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