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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-04-28 07:25 PM


margined plates of sun-drenched glass
filtering rays of nectar-rich bursts
discolor the mind with menthol dreams,
sundae flavors melting in passages of time decayed

rendering motifs of misshapen delusions
recalling inconsistencies of reveries’ past—
its beauty, gleaming gusts of rainbows’ dustings
settling marks of what was once believed

into transient hopes of that which may yet be



© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-04-28 08:26 PM


Hey welcome back!
What descriptive lines within...enjoyed.
TD

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-04-28 10:00 PM



Long live the desire to hope...

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3 posted 2004-04-28 10:23 PM


Much has been said within these words.
Very nicely penned..very nice indeed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


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iliana
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4 posted 2004-04-29 01:55 AM


"its beauty, gleaming gusts of rainbows’ dustings
settling marks of what was once believed

into transient hopes of that which may yet be"

Why aren't there more posts to this one -- it's sooooo good!  


passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-29 03:09 AM


beautiful!
steavenr
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6 posted 2004-04-29 06:56 PM


Hello all,

Glad to be back if but for a short time.  (It seems that when life calls, it steals my time and demands my creativity be channeled in other directions.)  

Thank you all for your kind comments.  This was truly inspired...I was in a quaint church recently that had exquisite stained glass windows on three sides...and it was a sunny day.

It evoked a response...

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