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Rainbows in a Quiet Place
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Rainbows in a Quiet Place |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Bending swollen light, central energy field of colors Separating white sound, beams of weightlessness, spiraling Turns when it enters our swarm, Simplification, but think… Our mind foresees a mutual design, of relationships invariably Bringing moisture’s foregoing evaporation into jewels of a subtle direction, where we may trod, owning meaning Everywhere arms drawing near to one another with inherent delight Already knowing the nature of harmless ripples of visions Circling, dismissing meanings which have characters of darkness Never assigning value to differences….or thinking inferior Every change in weather floods color guides of passing teams Musical pleasing, transforming notes of fondness, sensing received relevance Nothing, but alarm, snatches away budding in my pitifully, small occasion The only possible result in believing there is nothing, tastes me as slave While evaluating myself, family, friends…inferior, pursues improvement over another I existed before apprehension and will do so when it passes, Wrapping not my attention so tightly about concern For what I am is seen by my permission…to a broader sense intimate Life is all communicating and moving me in towards a completed sphere Sensitive towards, less willing to mischief…redefining…demanding my shadow to move Viewing what I love, receiving & giving are the same…so..I let go… Embracing Rainbows in the quiet place. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write Lee J. Your poetry never ceases to amaze me. Enjoyed this one a lot! JL  |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This was very cool. It gets better with each reading. Lots of great lines and messages thoughout. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lee, an amazing piece which I want to study further -- very amazing and along lines I've been pondering lately!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing indeed...I'll have to come back to read this again |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, LeeJ... what a lovely concept... one to remember!!! *S* |
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