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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-04-28 12:06 PM



The heartache of  broken
showing in the hearts
of those who are
sad and lonely

Such pain   hurt   of rejection
of a love   faded
with leavings of empty space within
deep inner beings of

Of hearts now aching
now broken     with coldness within
A void where completeness
warmth  once occupied

When I read of
this devastation    hurt,  pain
many heart cries
looking for   release of

You and I always come to mind......
Of how that even though
when space is between
we are sad and lonely

We are so blessed to have
love for each other
A love of desire and need
passion and warmth

A love with fulfillment   completeness
in which hearts
blend into   one
keeping us ever close        even in distance

in this space that hurts so badly.......


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-04-28 12:31 PM


Ethel...
Where love is concerned, I believe that the purpose of that ache is like training is for an athlete...the sweet pain renews that desire, longing, commitment and devotion. You always touch my heart.  Well written.
TD

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2 posted 2004-04-28 12:33 PM


yes Ethel, you two are blessed
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3 posted 2004-05-16 11:20 AM


  I so understand this Ethel.....

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calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
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4 posted 2004-05-16 04:27 PM


I know where you are coming from sweet lady.
Heart hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2004-05-17 04:59 AM


This is a wonderful poem.. I like the way you expressed it, emphasizing on certain powerful feelings..
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6 posted 2004-05-17 05:34 AM


yes... the space aches
But the blessing.. the love, that is amazing
Beautiful expressions Ethel...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

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7 posted 2004-05-17 12:41 PM


I appreciate and love you all.


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