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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-04-27 11:38 PM




It's times like these
when I miss the bad old days,
the purple haze,
music I remembered
having heard it only once,
easy money for the making,
simple freedoms for the taking,
solutions,
though maybe good or evil,
that always seemed in focus
and in reach;
it was a world of just
judgmental
righteous
soft soliloquies;
I am not defending messes I helped make,
but then I don't have the time,
or inclination,
to offer up a simple reconstruction
of a scripted recollection
some campaign staffer had to fake
for all the world to see,
like the stories of the shining faces
whining nightly now
on news TV.

I won't ask you where those days went
because I still recall how mine were spent,
but I do believe they were heaven sent,
and I wonder sometimes
if that's where they've returned.

©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
1 posted 2004-04-28 12:02 PM


well crafted rant man

I nod a lot when I read you

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-04-28 12:07 PM


Know what you mean, Mr. Icebox.  Those were the days and I wouldn't trade that either.  Things always go round and history always repeats itself.  What an outstanding and historic write!  
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2004-04-28 12:19 PM


If there's a "heaven" that's where they must be but have you ever thought that a mind could be called by another name like "heaven", for instance?  I do so enjoy reading your thoughts, icebox.  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-04-28 02:40 AM


I know
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2004-04-28 06:49 AM


I won't ask you where those days went
because I still recall how mine were spent,
but I do believe they were heaven sent,
and I wonder sometimes
if that's where they've returned.

~*~

This, the bow
on the box
of words.

Thank you.

Denise
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6 posted 2004-04-28 09:09 PM


Great expression, icebox!

It seems most politicians are in the reconstruction business...I wonder if they have their own union?!

Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes.
Elizabeth Barrett Browning

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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7 posted 2004-04-28 10:13 PM


icebox

I have realized lately about circles...and it seems that what was could return easily from where it came.  

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
8 posted 2004-04-28 10:39 PM


Like LR, I find often find myself nodding
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