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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-04-27 10:50 PM

Between us there is but a breath
That thought might close to vapors
A furl of lash on widened eyes
The sudden tremble of surprise
More intimate than any words we trade
Heat signature in outline of a love well made
Definition that imprints its memory glow
Intuition purely stated all we need to know
Having fun in silence scant as happiness resides
The opening sensation at the calm of eventides
Coursing images of firelight set forever in between
That runs warm…my hands to follow form
The definition of such fine design
So eagerly the spaces we resign
Between us there is but a breath
As time itself is but to death
And into puddle melts
The more

Copyright Kkh 4/27/04

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-28 02:47 AM

beautiful

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-04-28 06:32 AM

I agree, this is beautiful, Kathleen

M

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2004-04-28 08:38 AM

This seems somehow very intimate but as always, very beautiful.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-04-29 02:13 AM

"Heat signature in outline of a love well made
Definition that imprints its memory glow"

Someone needs to invent new adjectives to describe how beautiful your work is!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-04-29 03:47 PM

i agree with ilana
its truly a tapestry,
like a dream within a dream
always something more on the next read around

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-04-29 06:29 PM

Very nice poetry, great write!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”
JL

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-04-29 06:33 PM

this will almost cost you one confessional
card!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2004-04-29 07:01 PM

This poem flows beautifully into vision...I love the feel of it..

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