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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-27 02:30 PM



Traveling

I browse through the mood in writing
wondering how it is I have gotten this far
and how much further I still must travel.

Four hundred miles each way, soon
to bring back what should be here,
to have us all together, to ease the needs of each.

Eight hundred miles of thought,
half of it in anticipation, the other half
in relief, knowing that this time
is better than what will lie ahead.

To relieve tension, to have my heart's rhythm
beat stronger for a reason
other than the darkness soon to come,
words no longer there, only silence,
as it should be.

Poetry in motion, soon to be my travels.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-04-27 02:33 PM


And a wonderful place to be, too.  Great write!
JL


PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2004-04-27 04:39 PM


This shows that traveling can be the reward as much as the destination...
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-04-27 05:10 PM


To relieve tension, to have my heart's rhythm
beat stronger for a reason
other than the darkness soon to come,
words no longer there, only silence,
as it should be.


Ahhh M! You move me so.
Love and hugs. Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-04-28 06:51 AM


JL, PKreturns, Margherita  I apreciate your stopping by to read and respond, thank you,
*s
M

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