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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-04-27 01:31 PM



Whisper three small words
~ Courting a love by promise ~
Repeat, “I do, too…”


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 2004-04-27 01:51 PM


Karilea,

I love the multiple meanings here. Brevity is so difficult to do well. You do it well, friend!

Corinne

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2 posted 2004-04-27 02:45 PM


I do, too

Can one wish for more?
You have caught the very essence.

Wonderful!
Love, Margherita  

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3 posted 2004-04-27 02:56 PM


Perfect
TD

kayjay
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4 posted 2004-04-27 03:09 PM


And that loving phrase
May also be echoed by
And I you, my love

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2004-04-27 04:43 PM


Lovely Karilea

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!


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6 posted 2004-04-27 10:06 PM


Yes......

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pictureme
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7 posted 2004-04-27 10:45 PM


I feel it takes a special person to write a good haiku. 17 sylables to complete the meaning! yet here for the third time tonight I am totally impressed. Nice job and include me in "I do, too!".
creative write.
pictureme :-)

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8 posted 2004-04-28 03:09 AM


*big smile*
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9 posted 2004-04-29 11:00 AM


Wonderful!
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10 posted 2004-04-29 11:17 AM


..........yes.  


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

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11 posted 2004-04-29 02:53 PM


Oh wow...!!!!

Eric

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12 posted 2004-04-29 06:35 PM


What else might be said....perhaps
"and I will"...  excellent thought.

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13 posted 2004-04-29 06:59 PM


Ah, yes, very well said...

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