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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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I... Sometimes can't remember my own name. And I..I,I,I,I,I... Really have no shame. I... I...feel so alive. And I..I,I,I,I,I... Am ensnared by your love's hive. I... Can't see anything but you. And I..I,I,I,I,I... Know you feel it too. But I... Have just one concern. I..I,I,I,I,I... Don't want to burn. I... Stop to think about it, And I..I,I,I,I,I... Glow like in me the Sun was lit. I... Just wanted to let you know. That I...I,I,I,I,I... With you old I want to grow. I... Have Heaven's gift from above. And I...I,I,I,I,I... You...I do love. Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know what you want Kyle... but seem a little hesitant..?  Good stuff and good morning! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
well yeah somewhat i suppose...i ahve good reason though..i think..ive never had a girl anything like her its hard to explain =P |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL if she can make YOU trip over your tongue then she is someone I want to meet |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
you will one of these days Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. Enjoyed the read. JL |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I liked the format of this..very cool. Tell me, in the picture, what is in front of you? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I....,I....,I.....,I....,Liked. Bon-Bon  |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
well thank ya everyone...and thats a sword in front of me |
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