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*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2004-04-27 02:47 AM

So yes...this would be a rant...

I spent eternity in your arms last night
Like I have so many times before
I spent a lifetime in your arms
Safe, yet wanting more…

You looked at me with beautifully sinful eyes
And pleaded softly to me your hearts case
And I sat warm next you yet distanced myself from your heat
Knowing the lies that have come from that handsome face

You held me close and said Pookie I love you
Prove it
You stared into my eyes and promised it was the last time you would hurt me
Prove it

You must earn back what you have lost
Trust is easily broken and hard to gain
But if you work hard and you really show me
Perhaps we can move on and forgive all this pain

You said I was what you needed now and forever
Prove it
You kissed my hand and swore you would make things right
Prove it

I won’t lie, I want you to find me
I’m falling, slowly into the abyss
I want you to chase me and catch me before I land
I’ll be here waiting for you, I promise that if you try I won’t let you miss

I love you honey bear
That much said is true…
But do you want me the way I want you?
…PROVE IT

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-27 02:49 AM

great write...wishing all the best for the both of you

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-04-27 02:50 AM

Bella -- great write! If he truly loves you, I believe he will! Hugs sent your way. ..........jo

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-04-27 10:11 AM

an interesting write...not sure whether "proving it" makes a difference...sometimes temporary proving
is what comes from it.

M

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2004-04-27 01:58 PM

Thanks for the comments guys. I really hope he does prove it to me because I care about him more than anything...but at the same time I do have that small feeling that whatever he does will only be temporary...sigh...I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-04-27 08:14 PM

Enjoyed...James

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

6 posted 2004-04-27 08:21 PM

Without a single doubt, you expressed your feelings vividly and with force. Should he read this, I don't know, but I do know this, you know what may come and what you may need to do. Enjoyed and Good luck!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

7 posted 2004-05-10 07:35 PM

my heart goes out to you

great poem
...
wolfy

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