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some new tanka poems
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some new tanka poems |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
HAiku and tanka are really what I was known for here -here are a few new tanka poems.... 1) Addicted I wake at daybreak desperate with longing; there's no antidote for this need to be with you- your touch is my addiction. 2) Beacon Watching the shimmer of early evening stars I realize again I am meant for your beacon in this dark and lonely world. 3) your voice on the wind whispers just behind my ear shivers down my spine pleasure-pools across my hips leaves me begging for more.... 4) winter surrenders as spring stretches her arms to embrace the sun but I still long for summer and your touch on my bare skin. [This message has been edited by Beki (04-27-2004 03:08 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beki -- all lovely -- #5's my favorite!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like 5 best too |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
oops -forgot to change that to #4 fixed now  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice..each of them *s M |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Although all 4 were good, I enjoyed the 1st one the best. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Please delet this duplicate post. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Opeth (04-27-2004 08:29 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki Enjoyed, my fav is #1. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
and theyre all very nice Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beki they are all lovely, but I did enjoy number four the most as well. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well done. I most enjoyed #3 INclan |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
All great, number one being the best.....how ya been Beki? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wow...had a hard time picking a favorite.. But, I have to say #3. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful all of them. Favorite is number one! Love, Margherita |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
WOW SUCH A NICE RESPONSE THANKS EVERYONE FOR READING -IT IS GREAT TO BE BACK AT PASSIONS |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beki, all were equally good to me, and as I have read you here and there over the internet, I must say it is nice to see you here so I don't have to find you.  Welcome back!Wonder if you could fix the link to your website sure would like to go read there? Thanks. Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sorry my friend who hosted my website shut it down i only recently found out but you can find my stuff at haikuhut.com, I have a page there....and am working on setting up another website as we speak....it is nice toknow you want to find me thanks.... |
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