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A Flow of Blood

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JamesMichael
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A Flow of Blood


Her kiss was like eating
a red Washington apple.
A surging flow of juice
as her teeth broke
through the outer skin.

But then, she did tell
me she was a vampire.
I didn't believe her
until a flow of
blood began.


JamesLee
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2004


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Red does attract me....I will change into a and fly out the window....

a.k.a..Mistress of the night...

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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James -- I enjoyed the contrast in this poem; very entertaining!  
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YAY!! I loved this, of course I've always had a soft spot for washington apples and vampires!! hehehe....
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

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ouch...gawd!
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Yes yes yes she is a woman of spirit James   However.......what can I say...
Good write!


Eric

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Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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good one, enjoyed!
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Thank each of you...I like a good solid kisser...James
 
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