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0 posted 2004-04-26 03:03 PM



Isopod:
Life As A Pillbug

It’s not hard,
deadly simple to be a throwback.
I should know,
dead-ends have become a specialty
in my precincts.
Still I could at least assert that I am
a bit ahead,
his dead end also a dead beginning.
We share much,
though juggling fourteen legs would be
beyond me.
We two have such a talent for defense,
curving inward,
curling hopelessly into a gray seed
in a world of birds.


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-04-26 03:21 PM


though juggling fourteen legs would be
beyond me.

oh my, can you imagine, 7 pairs of sneakers?

Your writes are genious!

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2 posted 2004-04-26 03:24 PM


14 legs...wonder how fast I would be able to move then

*s
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3 posted 2004-04-26 03:27 PM


Now here I was today
trying to compose a little something
around whirligigs...

and you write of pillbugs.


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4 posted 2004-04-26 03:31 PM


Gee 14 legs..that's seven pairs of getaway sticks.
Loved this one Ed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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5 posted 2004-04-27 03:48 AM


humming the whole time, I would imagine.
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6 posted 2004-04-27 09:13 AM


dingus--

YOU WIN THE WASHER AND DRYER!!!

You just made my day, bud -- that is exactly what I'm talkin' about! Folks, dingus-mon is referring to another poem of mine, that I posted almost two months ago..... /pip/Forum88/HTML/002114.html

Thank you for remembering, Larry....

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7 posted 2004-04-27 01:53 PM


My bet would be that'd you'd manage those feet just fine... and heaven help the bird that thought you easy prey. *G*

This is excellent, my friend... light and dark curl in on each other here... but the result is a softened heart, not a hard bead.

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