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Open Poetry #32
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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-04-26 02:48 PM


The embers still warm
Smoke and steam in rising swarm
The lamppost is spine
Possessions now char
Except what’s on and the car
None not burnt to find
Roll away from there
Roll away from life and care
Start again full blind.

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-04-26 10:35 PM


Total distruction has a purpose too...
starting over.
TD

azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
2 posted 2004-04-26 10:36 PM


Wow...powerful images.

I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind...

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-04-27 12:41 PM


Vivid!  Hope this hasn't happened.  
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