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Silent Words to Soft Walls
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Silent Words to Soft Walls |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Silent Words to Soft Walls Dampness can't elude me this morning, the dark to grey soon to be my day. Clouded memory makes one day no different than the next and the sleeplessness continues. Sometimes I think that starting over doesn't feed the need, turning my back now on those open possibilities, those that open and close at another's will. The day will unveil the building of another wall, softer than in the past, but one that allows me a little more bounce and less headaches when banging against it. Silent words to reflect upon, my own business minded by no one now, but me. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes I think that starting over doesn't feed the need, turning my back now on those open possibilities, those that open and close at another's will. The day will unveil the building of another wall, softer than in the past, but one that allows me a little more bounce and less headaches when banging against it. ================================ clever use of metaphor and theme.. a bittersweet sharing...we build walls and look for soft places to fall.... well done Poetess Maureen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A good sign,  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why bounce when you can fly? starting over is good  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The day will unveil the building of another wall, softer than in the past, but one that allows me a little more bounce and less headaches when banging against it. walls or wallless the heart feels the same inside tho we may try to hide it, we cant build enough to pad ourselves it seems good words maureen , reflective and honest as always in your poetry |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen -- your expressioned flowed really well. Gray at least has shades of light! Hope you have a good day.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Janet Marie, I have decided I will wait until my life situation improves and I have more to offer someone than just who I am, maybe then I will have more control over my life...and won't need those walls whether soft or hard to bounce off of. Thank you, I probably didn't even give a thought to it being a metaphor M Sy, a somewhat better sign than that of yesterday M Dixie, I am not so sure I am ready to fly yet...and starting over is tiring at my age Michele, I am just trying to relieve myself of more tension than is necessary at this time with my sister...it is always nice to know you can count on someone to listen and advise but then again maybe it is asking too much of some... thank you for "listening" hugs M iliana, not too much light here today.but that's ok, there is always tomorrow~~~ *s M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-26-2004 07:30 PM).] |
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