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Beki
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since 1999-09-15

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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2004-04-26 04:57 AM

When Summer Comes

When summer comes
and we are finally standing
face to face ~
will we rush wildly
into each other's arms,
or stand quietly,
gazing intently into each other's eyes,
waiting anxiously for some sign
of who will make the first move?

I confess I cannot say,
I only know when summer comes
and you are finally within arms reach,
I want to feel your hands
on every part of me at once.
I want to fall deep
into that long anticipated kiss,
so deep that I might never
come up for air.
And if I am to drown,
let it be in your eyes
when summer comes.

© Copyright 2004 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2004-04-26 04:59 AM

such longing and anticipation

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-06-03 11:40 PM

beautifully romantic...classic ending...

"And if I am to drown,
let it be in your eyes
when summer comes"

truly what a way to go...

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2004-06-04 10:41 AM

Wonderful powerful expression of longing, which leaves me with feelings of hopefulness.

~P

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-06-04 10:46 AM

Wow, this is sooooo goood! Really enjoyed the poem.

JL

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-06-04 10:48 AM

This is a beautiful poem. So romantic.
I really enjoyed reading it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-06-05 01:01 AM

Yes...let it be...James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-06-05 01:03 AM

Beki -- oh, the longing in this poem -- that person had better take a deeeeep breath! lol Have a great summer!

...jo

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

8 posted 2004-06-20 11:57 PM

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Bekiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ...
:------)

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-06-21 12:12 PM

Wow! This takes me back a day or two! How romantic! Enjoyed.

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