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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-04-25 08:33 PM



Key to a stress free life
free method to avoid strife
a way to cope with mundane tasks
an alternate behavior when one asks...

What was the city that I came from?
the product of two figures more than its sum..
I should answer in a more delightful way
to keep conventional targets at bay...

When asked how I am should I laugh
provoke stares from support staff,
just answer the question for what it's worth
save the humour for appropriate mirth..

I am tired of conventional, 'how do you dos'
tired of the dance to continual blues..
must break out into a dance when asked for change
no reason to hold back on unconventional mains...

Break out into an alternate solution
curb renditions of verbal pollution,
keys to stress free life.. where I come from...
the product of two figures is greater than its sum.


© copyright ecrivan 2004

[This message has been edited by wordwizard (04-26-2004 09:26 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2004-04-25 09:06 PM


Good to read you again Martin.
Felt the restlessness in this one...sometimes the changes are necessary, vibrant and self renewing.
Charming in every word.
TD

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-25 10:53 PM


needed this tonight!
Sadelite
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3 posted 2004-04-25 11:09 PM


Break out into an alternate solution
curb renditions of verbal pollution,
keys to stress free life.. where I come from...
the product of two figures is greater than its sum.

Yes!  Excellent advice and poem.

azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert
4 posted 2004-04-25 11:13 PM


Whew...you hit the nail on the head with this one!  Well Done!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

iliana
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5 posted 2004-04-25 11:38 PM


Just plain brilliant!
Local Rebel
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6 posted 2004-04-26 01:18 AM


how'dya do gov?

nice gestalt

wordwizard
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7 posted 2004-04-26 09:25 PM


A little social therapy wrapped up in a convenient style...thanks for reading all


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