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Patricia
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0 posted 2004-04-25 07:57 PM



I Dress This Day

I dress this day in rainbow,
blue hue and stained-glass glow.

My skin breathes His light,
lifting ancient veils of night.

And I,

Frocked in blush of His insight,

Celebrate dawn,

Knowing yesterday rests eternal
in a satin gown of what was

While tomorrow wanders
barefoot and naked,
waiting sandals and
summer dress.

© Copyright 2004 Patricia A. Plotz - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-04-25 09:07 PM


Vive la summer dress!!!
Wonderful, and welcome back. We missed you.
TD

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2 posted 2004-04-25 09:47 PM


"And I,

Frocked in blush of His insight,

Celebrate dawn,

Knowing yesterday rests eternal
in a satin gown of what was

While tomorrow wanders
barefoot and naked,
waiting sandals and
summer dress."

Beautiful!!  I too have missed your words.
Hugs dear poetess.

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-04-25 10:28 PM



A beautiful Sunday write...
a welcome bequest to beseech Summer...

my friend...it's good to have you home again!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-25 10:49 PM


I can't wait for dresses and sandals!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-04-25 11:15 PM


This is stunningly magnificent, Poetessa Patricia! Gosh, I've been missing both you and your poetry! ~ and this poem is an excellent example of why!

Good to read you again! Now this time, stay awhile! ~ a l-o-n-g while!!!

Warm, welcome-back hugs!
EA

azblond
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6 posted 2004-04-25 11:21 PM


Very well said!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

iliana
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7 posted 2004-04-25 11:30 PM


What beautiful clothing you wear, Patricia!  
garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-04-26 10:59 AM


Knowing yesterday rests eternal
in a satin gown of what was

While tomorrow wanders
barefoot and naked,
waiting sandals and
summer dress.


Patricia, how I have missed you!! And this
has such a sweet expectancy to it!!
Hugs, sweet lady  
Ethel

Grover
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9 posted 2004-04-26 02:02 PM


Wow!
Suetang
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10 posted 2004-04-26 08:56 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Patricia.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

jwesley
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11 posted 2004-04-26 09:17 PM


unique way of putting it, my friend...very well done....

jwesley

Margherita
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12 posted 2004-04-27 02:33 PM


Simply enchanting!
I love your dress!
Love, Margherita

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13 posted 2004-04-27 10:08 PM


Upon due consideration, I do consider "rainbow" to be your best color....and it fits so well, wouldn't want to see you in any other!

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14 posted 2004-04-29 12:00 PM


beautiful lady....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

BluesSerenade
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15 posted 2004-05-01 11:18 PM


OH yes!! Such a meaningful sentiment...
gotta love those sandals and summer dresses.


Mmmmmmmm, so breezy and beautiful, Patricia~

steavenr
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16 posted 2004-05-06 12:02 PM


a lot going on in this one...good write...always check to see if you are writing again...your sparcity is almost made up by your brilliance...good to see you writing again...you always leave me wanting more in your poetry...this one was elegant
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