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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-25 05:47 PM


Orange Light District
(Co-Titled "Please Offer These Songs To The Elderly And Handicapped)
By: Noah Eaton
4/25/04

An old guitarist sits there,
by the telephone booth,
pleas to a young college student,
"Please offer these songs,
to the elderly and handicapped"
TURN AWAY, my child,
from the orange light district,
where ebony moths suckle at arsenic lampposts,
where the lambs aren't sheared,
there's nothing they can give to you there...

And the protest babies are gravid,
with blood-eyed sympathy,
cause their parents used to be like them,
but then somewhere along the way,
before the skirmish could become peremptory,
it backfired with deception,
just tell me,
how many more wars,
are you going to support?"

Come one, come all,
out of this orange light district,
come one, come all,
out of this orange light district...

Gerrymanders invoke their ghost dances,
with their scapegrace wands,
staring down from a tenement window,
a brother tells his sister,
"Please offer these songs,
to the elderly and handicapped"
RUN AWAY, my sister,
here we're treated like heretics,
don't scare at the screen,
it's bad,
and not only for your eyes...

And the ghostwriter wins the Caldecott Award,
amidst the diesel amber of the city,
but will never have a shot at the Hans Andersen medal,
for like you, they can see,
somewhere along the way,
truth isn't served with a cheese grater,
and the children,
the children will keep asking,
How many wars,
are you going to support?"

Come one, come all,
out of this orange light district,
come one, come all,
out of this orange light district...
Come one, come all,
out of this orange light district,
come one, come all,
out of this orange light district...
.
.
.
.
.
.
WE'RE ALL TREATED LIKE HERETICS
(and the truth is an exiled troglodyte),
WE'RE ALL TREATED LIKE HERETICS
(and the truth is an exiled troglodyte),
WE'RE ALL TREATED LIKE HERETICS,
thrown out of the simple creed,
and their impulse came only out of fear,
their impulse came only out of fear...
Once they unleash the lion,
how many tears will it require,
to tame it?
.
.
.
.
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HOW MANY WARS,
are you going to support...
.
.
.
HOW MANY WARS,
are you going to support...
.
.
.
Come one, come all,
out of this orange light district,
come one, come all,
out of this orange light district...
Come one, come all,
out of this orange light district,
come one, come all,
out of this orange light district...
.
.
.
.
.
.
Sister Mary sits there,
after Mass Sunday morning,
to the little girl in front,
and she says,
"Please offer these songs,
to the elderly and handicapped"
.
.
.



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-25 06:48 PM


Noah, God bless you for caring for those less fortunate... for speaking out against that which is wrong.
garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-04-26 01:57 AM


Noah, this was already on the second page. I'm glad that I looked there. I really respect you for speaking what you believe in, my friend.

By the way, I've missed you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-04-26 02:00 AM


nicely written
iliana
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4 posted 2004-04-26 03:32 AM


I am as I read.  Thanks, Noah Angel!
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5 posted 2004-04-26 10:31 AM


Noah,

I enjoyed this poem.  keep up the good work.  

~Laura~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-04-26 11:29 AM


Noah, the following passages were so memorable, that they bared repeating:

~ "where ebony moths suckle at arsenic lampposts,"

~ "And the protest babies are gravid,
with blood-eyed sympathy,"

~ "truth isn't served with a cheese grater"

~ "Once they unleash the lion,
how many tears will it require,
to tame it?"     ~indeed! how many?

Noah, you are a phenomemally gifted poet and songwriter ~with an equally phenomenal  loving and caring heart!

Love,
Your friend,
Linda


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7 posted 2004-04-26 11:30 AM


Thank you for this one Noah...
You are so caring ang giving.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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8 posted 2004-04-26 12:05 PM


you have a sweet heart Noah....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-04-26 12:07 PM


you certainly do have a talent for writing songs, very much enjoyed!!!!!!!
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-04-26 12:21 PM


pete seeger, woody and arlo, bobby dylan too
now you. sing it loud over the voices that
try to drown out the pleas of the masses

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-04-26 09:01 PM


Hello Noah

You have one of the kindest hearts I know and your words are an inspiration to many.  I have missed you as I very rarely post here anymore.  I hope your life is filled with much love and happiness always.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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12 posted 2004-04-27 09:29 AM


nicely written

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Margherita
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13 posted 2004-04-27 05:18 PM


HOW MANY WARS,
are you going to support...
.


I wonder too ...
Very powerful write and so compassionate.
You are a beautiful voice and always touch my heart, dear Noah.
Love, Margherita


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