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Open Poetry #32

Goodbye

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-04-25 03:51 PM

Goodbye
is what I want to say
The final word
before closing
...and opening
a new chapter
in my life

I smile
at the past
and hope
I
but you too
will find
the thing we search
yet did not found
during all the time
we spend..
together

Now, that time is
no more
Everyone's waiting
for the curtain to fall
at the most dramatic point
of play
Yet,
smiling at the past
I allow it
to slowly
close
all what's
behind

A new play
will come...
The ink is ready
pens bright new
yet
no words
can be written
untill
I've said it...

Thank you
... but goodbye

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-25 03:58 PM

To capture that moment... well done.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2004-04-25 04:03 PM

Who likes goodbyes?
But they do make for lots of poetic ink.
Curtains of words.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-25 04:54 PM

my thoughts exactly

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

4 posted 2004-04-25 04:56 PM

Thank you
But goodbye

Mmmm...

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-04-25 04:57 PM

kelly -- good write!

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