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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-04-25 01:57 PM



So near...

As if we are one flesh...belonging to
a thin fabric of air that falls
between us.

We are near...and yet veiled in
subtle distance.

The space we touch becomes holy to the
fingers.

Nothing exists beyond this point.

We are near...

And moving closer still.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-25 02:01 PM


you always write of that love so beautifully
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-04-25 02:02 PM


EXQUISITE!!

Krawdad
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3 posted 2004-04-25 02:05 PM


the fusion fantasy . . .
well said

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-25 04:41 PM


A very gifted write, a pleasure to read!
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5 posted 2004-04-25 04:49 PM


beautiful
iliana
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6 posted 2004-04-25 04:50 PM


Ooooooooh.....so lovely!  
azblond
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7 posted 2004-04-25 04:50 PM


This leaves me...Breathless.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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8 posted 2004-04-25 04:57 PM


Beautiful, Eric...just so beautiful!!  

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2004-04-25 06:58 PM


A timeless passion you behold.
What blessings we observe.
TD

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10 posted 2004-04-26 05:28 PM


You write of it well.
nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2004-04-26 06:47 PM


Very nice, Eric
*s
M

Margherita
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12 posted 2004-04-27 02:24 PM


quote:
So near...

As if we are one flesh...belonging to
a thin fabric of air that falls
between us.

We are near...and yet veiled in
subtle distance.

The space we touch becomes holy to the
fingers.

Nothing exists beyond this point.

We are near...

And moving closer still.



Thank you dear Eric for the shivers of delight!
Your words reveal the magical dimension of true nearness.
I love you. Margherita

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