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Ready To Spring
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Ready To Spring |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Ready To Spring Do you hear those words running across the page. Coiled up in the that ink well of the mind. Ready to spring and give everyone an electrifying ride filled with melodrama and intrigue. Sitting you on the edge of your seat until you read the next line and drink in each fascinating word. Here they come sliding down your pen spilling side splitting laughter- Casting salty tears of joy and hurling sadness with excruciating pain. Those mystcial words take you on a magical carpet excursion- Gliding you to the foaming oceans, splashing you with old haunting memories. Another twist of the wrist and you are high upon a mountain top looking down into the valley of fantasy and visualizing the commentary of richly blessed fairytales. At times those words run out of control- Like a train coming down a mountain top at full speed only to find that they have no brakes. The words keep coming at lightening speed pouring out the anguish and excitement that is held within. Come! Dear reader. Let your imagination flow like a river and cascade onto the pages of the universe. Dip into your ink well of the mind and share the adventure- For you know those thoughts are.... Ready to spring and give everyone an electrifying ride filled with melodrama and intrigue. Hugs Bon-Bon  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
What a wonderful ride along your imagination's trail! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 This one read like the words you speak of...and they are indeed just as you describe....they flow so, so unintentional, yet form into springs of complimenting care for that which is ours...this passionate world...another beauty from the overflowing wells of your soul..thank you for writing and sharing!!!! hugs...me |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You are a fascinating read Bonnie J. This is sooooooo great! I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing. JL  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
So very true!! I really liked this poem, written about the ways that one can write with all the emotion in them, just like you! Enjoyed. ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A wonderful read young lady.. |
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