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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2004-04-25 09:27 AM

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Incomparable You

Like church bells
in concert,
resonating
in my breast,
your words rise
in waves of pleasure
through my veins
settling in my heart.
In response I vibrate,
anchoring each sound
deep within
my inner space.
Every single note
blooms like a flower
and the scent of love
expands through
the whole of me.
My steps are light,
while I walk
above the ground,
my smile displayed
for all to behold.
I dance to the rhythm
of the sweet melody
you poured into me.
It is unique
yet it holds memories
of times consumed
in the fire of passion.
The echoes
keep spreading the tune
of a love so true
of a bond of souls ...
of incomparable You.

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-25 09:29 AM

My steps are light,

~*~

yes they are...just like
your words...light, and comforting...

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2004-04-25 09:37 AM

Amazing!

Thank you for sharing this.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-25 09:41 AM

Lovely lovely...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-04-25 09:55 AM

I don't know how you do it! I couldn't remember that feeling until I read your words and then I think back-that's exactly how first love felt; the bells reverberabated inside so much I thought at times I'd burst!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-04-25 09:59 AM

The echoes
keep spreading the tune
of a love so true
of a bond of souls ...
of incomparable You.

Yes, exactly.......

and

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-04-25 10:38 AM

Margherita, this is truly a love-ly poem of love!

Methinks that perhaps he is a reflection of the "Incomparable YOU"!!!

Light & Love Eternal,

Linda

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-04-25 10:45 AM

The echoes
keep spreading the tune
of a love so true
of a bond of souls ...
of incomparable You.'''
~

such a sweet expression of real love....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-04-25 10:56 AM

You are masterful in the craft of heartfelt.
My library is fed so very well.
TD

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-04-25 01:06 PM

So beautiful Margherita...beautiful.

Love,
Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-04-25 01:19 PM

like a Hallmark card, just gorgeous

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

11 posted 2004-04-25 01:21 PM

Whew! A hot one...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-04-25 11:49 PM

You've certainly captured a speck of the universe here and it's most precious gift!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-04-26 01:04 PM

The echoes
keep spreading the tune
of a love so true
of a bond of souls ...
of incomparable You.

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yes so beautifully said , it stays inside and feels just as you described

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

14 posted 2004-04-26 01:37 PM

Beautiful Margherita , true rhythms in harmony

Hope

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2004-04-26 02:10 PM

This incredible write and magnificant pic speaks volumns of a remarkable and uncompared spiritual union you've had, the picture to me depicts the fact that love constantly grows and is so blessed it becomes universal.

Absolutely stunning!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

16 posted 2004-04-26 05:09 PM

Very nice Margherita

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

17 posted 2004-04-26 08:55 PM

Hello Margherita

Your words flowed like a tranquil stream and were so beautifully written. I felt myself being swept away with the love and romance of your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

18 posted 2004-04-26 09:07 PM

Ah, a lovely write, my friend.

jwesley

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

19 posted 2004-04-27 05:30 PM

Thank you all my poet friends for your warm words of appreciation.
Yes, dear Linda, he IS ... and we all are!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2004-04-27 08:12 PM

Fantastic...indeed...James

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