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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-04-25 03:34 AM



free in the air
a molecule i am
just a speck in the night
have you noticed me
i am here in front of your mind
your eyes are reading me
words for emotions , a fair trade
the trappers are jealous
skills are learned not given in time
so keep listening closely
and then you will have achieved it
the anything you have always wanted in life
its there , right here
go ahead and approach me
grasp my fine handles made of jade
raise me above to the map of eternity
our beautiful sky
the perfect creation , a splendid personification
come over to the fire , sit beside the shaman
my feathers and special stones around you now
release the pressure settled beneath your brain
its there
wishing for you
its your choice to make
the chances go fast in this rotating orbit earth
awake from the haze of artificial everything
the land is still here to guide you back
we are in eden , we are in hell
it is one swirling whirlpool of sparkling light
leave the fear of being alive behind
it is time to be who you have always been



James D Wolf III
4/24/2004

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1 posted 2004-04-25 04:07 AM


oh wow! this speaks volumes to me right now!

thank you!

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-04-25 04:17 AM


Anytime babe

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-04-25 10:06 AM


it is one swirling whirlpool of sparkling light
leave the fear of being alive behind
it is time to be who you have always been


You say it!
Wonderful.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2004-04-25 10:12 AM


Excellent write!
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5 posted 2004-04-25 10:16 AM


you say it so well awesome write provoking thoughts as well....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-04-25 10:49 AM


There were too many excellent lines to copy, but one radiant write embraced and captured.
Exponentially Brilliant JW...
Will be back for another helping, I am sure
TD

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7 posted 2004-04-25 10:57 AM


I keep reading it over and over again...each time more entranced in the words than the last...

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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8 posted 2004-04-25 11:02 AM


A very interesting write! ~ and I mean "interesting" in the most positive of manners!

"awake from the haze of artificial everything
the land is still here to guide you back"

~ Absolutely!!!

Warm hugs and smiles,
EA

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9 posted 2004-04-25 01:38 PM


I am makin my way through this overgrown
trail , climbing a small mountain step
by step , day by day, pushing onward
that leads to the peak of the world

peace to all who have the guts to
take control of there lives
be strong and compassionate
patience and desire love eachother
oh oh oh how sweet and fine

latta
-wolf

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-04-25 02:51 PM


Couldn't help but respond to your reply...
There is a seed inside us all that flourishes...it isn't triggered by an age, or even time itself...
That divine calling...that purpose that aches until it is fed...that is freedom for sure.
The more I read this, the more inspired I became.  You are a good listener JDW.
TD

iliana
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11 posted 2004-04-25 02:56 PM


"leave the fear of being alive behind
it is time to be who you have always been"

Exactly!  Great writing.  


inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2004-04-25 03:33 PM


yes yes
release.........

Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-04-25 03:38 PM


Excellent excellent write...
very thought provoking..and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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14 posted 2004-04-29 11:27 AM


Yes
~simply~
Yes

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